FFXIII : The original concept of Fang

I don't know how many people wish my early death after I've done, but !

Most of the FFXIII fans are already knows the earlier, original plans, where Fang was a male character, but SE changed the gender to a female.
I saw great male Fang fanarts around the internet, so I decided, I give a try and make my version!
And then here we are!
I have mixed thoughts in my mind, so please take it as a simple, experimental try.

Tell me, what you think!! Naturally in a polite, civilizated way!
I don't wan any hater comments around my gallery, if is there any!

XNA Lara posing by Me
GIMP visual correction, background and additional effects by Me

Models:
Fang and Vanille (FFXIII;Square Enix) by o0Crofty0o and CarbinT